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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Tue Aug 18, 2009 11:32 am

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hey, how does everyone feel about my including pictures in my posts? if you have a problem, just tell me.
the pictures are fine by me
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Tue Aug 18, 2009 11:33 am

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btw, no offense to anyone, but when did the IAS become a softcore porn fanfic?
I have no idea o-o
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Tue Aug 18, 2009 12:07 pm

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hey, how does everyone feel about my including pictures in my posts? if you have a problem, just tell me.
the pictures are fine by me
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Tue Aug 18, 2009 2:50 pm

ALL HAIL THE GREAT WALL OF TEXT! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Tue Aug 18, 2009 2:52 pm

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ALL HAIL THE GREAT WALL OF TEXT! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Tue Aug 18, 2009 6:30 pm

The flashback Failed, due to the anticlimatic encounter. >.>
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Tue Aug 18, 2009 6:50 pm

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The flashback Failed, due to the anticlimatic encounter. >.>
which is why it is currently being edited Wink
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Tue Aug 18, 2009 10:49 pm

Note to Shira: DO NOT Attempt to save my chars. I will become sadistic if you do.
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Tue Aug 18, 2009 11:03 pm

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Note to Shira: DO NOT Attempt to save my chars. I will become sadistic if you do.
Wasn't planning on it... xDDD
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Thu Aug 20, 2009 3:08 pm

??? Has Joined the Brawl.... Wait, what?
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sat Aug 22, 2009 5:40 pm

-Page 12- (3/3)
We begin this magnificent return to the plot summaries with a flashback depicting the reason why Cedrine decided to leave the island she was GANNON-BANNED to. Apparently the Lord got jumped by a dragon. Regardless, we return to the desert, where Vaisey preps an invasion force to invade Astranova, and slays the messenger who refuses to camp with him. On the other side of the desert, Djaq spots the encampment and has Tristan raise the alarm. Around the same time, Kisen remembers a swordmaster who looks and talks a lot like Snike. He decides to ask him about the man the next opportunity he has, before the alarm rings. Meanwhile, we end this page by seeing Rakhshaza, this unknown enemy, reinforce Vaisey's assault squad. It looks like the rebels are screwed. T_T
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 12:19 am

Ratings with recent plot twists?
SMAC's: 8/10. Classic, not overly cheesy, and also unexpected.
Snike's: 7/10. Good idea, but the relationship between Kisen, Melissa and Snike was very strongly implied beforehand.
Luca's: 6.5/10. More like a changing of the guard more than a proper plot twist, but the yin and yang opens up a lot of possibilities for a large-scale plot twist.
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 1:45 am

Shiranui117 wrote:
Ratings with recent plot twists?
SMAC's: 8/10. Classic, not overly cheesy, and also unexpected.
Snike's: 7/10. Good idea, but the relationship between Kisen, Melissa and Snike was very strongly implied beforehand.
Luca's: 6.5/10. More like a changing of the guard more than a proper plot twist, but the yin and yang opens up a lot of possibilities for a large-scale plot twist.
*points to character bios for Kisen and Melissa*
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:58 am

Solidix Snike wrote:
Shiranui117 wrote:
Ratings with recent plot twists?
SMAC's: 8/10. Classic, not overly cheesy, and also unexpected.
Snike's: 7/10. Good idea, but the relationship between Kisen, Melissa and Snike was very strongly implied beforehand.
Luca's: 6.5/10. More like a changing of the guard more than a proper plot twist, but the yin and yang opens up a lot of possibilities for a large-scale plot twist.
*points to character bios for Kisen and Melissa*
that reveal was really anticlimactic. they're talking, and he's like, "BTW, i'm your neighbor, the only other survivor. goodnight." it's like dropping a bomb on the conversation... there was no room for dramatics?
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 11:19 am

td260 wrote:
Solidix Snike wrote:
Shiranui117 wrote:
Ratings with recent plot twists?
SMAC's: 8/10. Classic, not overly cheesy, and also unexpected.
Snike's: 7/10. Good idea, but the relationship between Kisen, Melissa and Snike was very strongly implied beforehand.
Luca's: 6.5/10. More like a changing of the guard more than a proper plot twist, but the yin and yang opens up a lot of possibilities for a large-scale plot twist.
*points to character bios for Kisen and Melissa*
that reveal was really anticlimactic. they're talking, and he's like, "BTW, i'm your neighbor, the only other survivor. goodnight." it's like dropping a bomb on the conversation... there was no room for dramatics?
It wasn't really a reveal. And as for the climatic part... LOL, I don't feel like making it a soap opera. >.>
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 11:30 am

Solidix Snike wrote:
td260 wrote:
Solidix Snike wrote:
Shiranui117 wrote:
Ratings with recent plot twists?
SMAC's: 8/10. Classic, not overly cheesy, and also unexpected.
Snike's: 7/10. Good idea, but the relationship between Kisen, Melissa and Snike was very strongly implied beforehand.
Luca's: 6.5/10. More like a changing of the guard more than a proper plot twist, but the yin and yang opens up a lot of possibilities for a large-scale plot twist.
*points to character bios for Kisen and Melissa*
that reveal was really anticlimactic. they're talking, and he's like, "BTW, i'm your neighbor, the only other survivor. goodnight." it's like dropping a bomb on the conversation... there was no room for dramatics?
It wasn't really a reveal. And as for the climatic part... LOL, I don't feel like making it a soap opera. >.>
no, soap operas drag a reveal out for 2-3 episodes. but you could have included a few ellipses and pauses, maybe a "how is this possible" from melissa, nothing special, but more than "I'm your long lost neighbor. Oh. Ok. Goodnight."
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 11:53 am

td260 wrote:
Solidix Snike wrote:
td260 wrote:
Solidix Snike wrote:
Shiranui117 wrote:
Ratings with recent plot twists?
SMAC's: 8/10. Classic, not overly cheesy, and also unexpected.
Snike's: 7/10. Good idea, but the relationship between Kisen, Melissa and Snike was very strongly implied beforehand.
Luca's: 6.5/10. More like a changing of the guard more than a proper plot twist, but the yin and yang opens up a lot of possibilities for a large-scale plot twist.
*points to character bios for Kisen and Melissa*
that reveal was really anticlimactic. they're talking, and he's like, "BTW, i'm your neighbor, the only other survivor. goodnight." it's like dropping a bomb on the conversation... there was no room for dramatics?
It wasn't really a reveal. And as for the climatic part... LOL, I don't feel like making it a soap opera. >.>
no, soap operas drag a reveal out for 2-3 episodes. but you could have included a few ellipses and pauses, maybe a "how is this possible" from melissa, nothing special, but more than "I'm your long lost neighbor. Oh. Ok. Goodnight."
You missed the point. I'm not a freakin' drama writer. Deal with it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 12:02 pm

Solidix Snike wrote:
td260 wrote:
Solidix Snike wrote:
td260 wrote:
Solidix Snike wrote:
Shiranui117 wrote:
Ratings with recent plot twists?
SMAC's: 8/10. Classic, not overly cheesy, and also unexpected.
Snike's: 7/10. Good idea, but the relationship between Kisen, Melissa and Snike was very strongly implied beforehand.
Luca's: 6.5/10. More like a changing of the guard more than a proper plot twist, but the yin and yang opens up a lot of possibilities for a large-scale plot twist.
*points to character bios for Kisen and Melissa*
that reveal was really anticlimactic. they're talking, and he's like, "BTW, i'm your neighbor, the only other survivor. goodnight." it's like dropping a bomb on the conversation... there was no room for dramatics?
It wasn't really a reveal. And as for the climatic part... LOL, I don't feel like making it a soap opera. >.>
no, soap operas drag a reveal out for 2-3 episodes. but you could have included a few ellipses and pauses, maybe a "how is this possible" from melissa, nothing special, but more than "I'm your long lost neighbor. Oh. Ok. Goodnight."
You missed the point. I'm not a freakin' drama writer. Deal with it.
ok, ok. w/e
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 12:12 pm

Rating on MY plot twist? o.o?

And, for reference, we DIDN'T make Neo City asplode this time around, right? xD
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 7:22 pm

last time I checked, arcade wasn't in the new one, so we're good Wink
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 7:23 pm

Shiranui117 wrote:
Ratings with recent plot twists?
SMAC's: 8/10. Classic, not overly cheesy, and also unexpected.
Snike's: 7/10. Good idea, but the relationship between Kisen, Melissa and Snike was very strongly implied beforehand.
Luca's: 6.5/10. More like a changing of the guard more than a proper plot twist, but the yin and yang opens up a lot of possibilities for a large-scale plot twist.
8/10!
HOORAH!
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 7:28 pm

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Rating on MY plot twist? o.o?

And, for reference, we DIDN'T make Neo City asplode this time around, right? xD
6/10 for originality, but 8/10 for execution.

And TY for forgetting the end of the world.
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 7:31 pm

switched my last two posts due to time paradox :O
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 7:38 pm

Solidix Snike wrote:
Shiranui117 wrote:
Rating on MY plot twist? o.o?

And, for reference, we DIDN'T make Neo City asplode this time around, right? xD
6/10 for originality, but 8/10 for execution.

And TY for forgetting the end of the world.
Really? I thought the idea was less common than that... And I'll take an 8/10 on that one. B- isn't a bad grade.
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Stand discussion topic.   Sun Aug 23, 2009 7:40 pm

Shiranui117 wrote:
Solidix Snike wrote:
Shiranui117 wrote:
Rating on MY plot twist? o.o?

And, for reference, we DIDN'T make Neo City asplode this time around, right? xD
6/10 for originality, but 8/10 for execution.

And TY for forgetting the end of the world.
Really? I thought the idea was less common than that... And I'll take an 8/10 on that one. B- isn't a bad grade.
You'll see what I mean later on in part 2.
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