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Solidix Snike
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PostSubject: It's Baaaaack.   Fri Jul 03, 2009 3:46 pm

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hey snike its not quiet nice talking behind my back.
u wanna say something say it to my face and btw my name is enddragon7 not enddragon17
and i dont need u feeling sorry for me either and sure as heck aren't no where
and wat help have we gotten from shu that wil said we did? i don't even know way he's talking about when he said that.


This, class, is an example of how not to spell/punctuate. As you can see, it makes no sense whatsoever. Today, I will show you 4 easy steps to make poor excuses for posts like these legible.

Step 1. Fix spelling errors. This means no misused abbreviations/non-existant words. Here's what the above paragraph looks like after this step:
hey snike its not quite nice talking behind my back.
you want to say something say it to my face and by the way my name is enddragon7 not enddragon17
and i dont need you feeling sorry for me either and sure as heck aren't nowhere
and what help have we gotten from shu that wil said we did? i don't even know what he's talking about when he said that.


Step 2. Capitalization where needed. Names, pronoun Is, groups, etc... Half-completed edition of the example paragraph.
Hey Snike its not quite nice talking behind my back.
You want to say something say it to my face and by the way my name is enddragon7 not enddragon17
and I dont need you feeling sorry for me either and sure as heck aren't nowhere
and what help have we gotten from Shu that Wil said we did? I don't even know what he's talking about when he said that.


Step 3. Punctuation. (!,'.? etc) 75% finished version of the post:
Hey, Snike, it's not quite nice talking behind my back.
You want to say something, say it to my face and by the way, my name is enddragon7, not enddragon17
and I don't need you feeling sorry for me either and sure as heck aren't nowhere
and what help have we gotten from Shu that Wil said we did? I don't even know what he's talking about when he said that.


Step 4. Fixing Run-on sentences. Now, after 4 steps of editing, here's the final copy:
Hey, Snike, it's not quite nice talking behind my back.
You want to say something, say it to my face and by the way, my name is enddragon7, not enddragon17.
I don't need you feeling sorry for me either and sure as heck aren't nowhere.
What help have we gotten from Shu that Wil said we did? I don't even know what he's talking about when he said that.


Does it make sense now? No, that's up to the poster. But is it legible now? Definitely.

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PostSubject: Re: It's Baaaaack.   Fri Jul 03, 2009 3:47 pm

xD
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PostSubject: Re: It's Baaaaack.   Fri Jul 03, 2009 5:01 pm

Ah, this old thing.

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PostSubject: Re: It's Baaaaack.   Fri Jul 03, 2009 5:33 pm

its come for me! Shocked

*hop's into the magical space craft mobius*

FLEEE! FLEEE!
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PostSubject: Re: It's Baaaaack.   Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:42 pm

*sigh*
this again?
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PostSubject: Re: It's Baaaaack.   Sun Jul 05, 2009 9:36 pm

xDDDDDD Oh, God...
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